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Friday, 29 September 2017

Kirpal The Bush

I heard a nose but no one was there.


I saw someone coming here.


It had black and white strics on.


It was coming closer by my tent.


I started hiding in my tent.


Then it came into my tent.


I started to scream


It was a ghost.


I ran out of my tent.


I hide behind a tree.


He came by me.


Then I shouted and run away.


Then I raned out of the bush.
The End   











1 comment:

  1. hi Kirpal I like the way got Ideis and a fun end By Mohit

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